michey wrote:It would be easier to understand if they had full names, even if they were fake names just for the context of your story, as it is i find it very confusing and have to go back to work out "who is screwing who" literally, it is a great continuing story though and i love hearing it.Wisher wrote:D+D wrote:I think that S should be the center of entertainment at M's stag party.
I still can't figure out the alphabet ... S is the Mother?
I might rather the twin sister be the center of attention, dressed in bridal white.
You are exactly right. If the mother's real name is Mary, call her Bertha, just put out a name as opposed to an initial so we all know who's who.