Ponytail: A Bull's Story

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by knight4princess » Tue Nov 14, 2017 11:42 am

Well told as usual. Thanks.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by SamWarrens » Tue Nov 14, 2017 12:44 pm

Besides Marc, how many times was she fucked that night? Did Marc have her again?
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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Joatster » Tue Nov 14, 2017 1:17 pm

SamWarrens wrote:Besides Marc, how many times was she fucked that night? Did Marc have her again?
More about that night is coming.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by jmontagn » Wed Nov 15, 2017 6:29 am

Joatster wrote:
SamWarrens wrote:Besides Marc, how many times was she fucked that night? Did Marc have her again?
More about that night is coming.
I can't wait to see it.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Curiousguy99 » Wed Nov 15, 2017 2:08 pm

Wow! What a great chapter. Your descriptive writing style is awesome.
Well worth the wait.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!

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Unread post by Clueless hubby » Wed Nov 15, 2017 2:19 pm

I check to see if you’ve posted almost daily and you did not disappoint.
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Unread post by knight4princess » Wed Nov 15, 2017 6:40 pm

Clueless hubby: You can "Subscribe to Topic" (top of page) and get e-mail notifications when someone posts to this thread -- as I do.

But there are a lot of other reasons to log on to this forum every day, anyway! ;-)

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Unread post by Clueless hubby » Thu Nov 16, 2017 11:50 am

knight4princess wrote:Clueless hubby: You can "Subscribe to Topic" (top of page) and get e-mail notifications when someone posts to this thread -- as I do.

But there are a lot of other reasons to log on to this forum every day, anyway! ;-)
I know,, I kinda get a kick out of lookin though everyone’s posts.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Goodboy66 » Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:21 am

Another good update thanks. Only thing for me missing from the story, is little sub plots of Lou and Jeff's thoughts and their interactions with each other. But another chapter will do.

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Unread post by Joatster » Fri Nov 17, 2017 5:56 am

Goodboy66 wrote:Another good update thanks. Only thing for me missing from the story, is little sub plots of Lou and Jeff's thoughts and their interactions with each other. But another chapter will do.
I agree, but that is hard to do with the story in first person without hopping the point of view around - not something I can really start this far into it.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Goodboy66 » Fri Nov 17, 2017 8:36 am

Just read what I had written, " But another chapter will do." I didn't mean to start now, I meant another chapter soon please.

I understand how difficult it would be doing a story from 3 characters.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by sensual9696 » Sat Dec 02, 2017 6:51 am

Excellent, and indeed, well worth the wait!

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Open2it » Sun Dec 03, 2017 12:47 pm

Instant erection!!! Well done sir.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by SamWarrens » Wed Jun 06, 2018 8:25 pm

Joatster: You are as bad as I am at getting on with the story. My excuse is I have been quite ill and had a heart attack 6 weeks ago.
I truly hope that is not true in your case.
Please find the time to move forward with this excellent story.
I will endeavour to get on with mine.
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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by wifeneedn » Fri Jul 27, 2018 12:51 pm

Just found this tale, Very glad I did! As a cuckold myself I filled in in my own mind a lot of what Jeff was feeling/dealing with in his mind.
What a wonderful place for a cuckold to be.
Great story! As everyone else following, waiting for the next chapter.
Cheers.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by SamWarrens » Mon Dec 10, 2018 5:29 am

Joatster; Just noted the date I sent my last text - I had a big heart attack that day and had an appendectomy 2 days later. Ended up having 4 heart attacks in 3 months!
Hope none of that happened to you and that you will get around to finishing this story.
I know how things can get in the way of our story telling.
Hope all is well and you get to finish this great story.
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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by SamWarrens » Mon May 20, 2019 7:11 am

A year later. Joatster, no follow up.
Please finish this story!
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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Joatster » Thu Jun 06, 2019 5:16 am

The good news - I've finished the story. The remainder of the party night for Lou is there in steamy detail. Plus, there are further adventures and the big news at the end.

The other news - For various reasons, I've decided not to post it on this site. I don't want to go into details here, but suffice it to say that the community here is great but I bounced off of an attitude here and there that I can't support.

And finally - You can get it at Amazon. It is free with Kindle Unlimited, three bucks without. Just search for Jay Oatster or for Ponytail: A Bull's Story.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by knight4princess » Thu Jun 06, 2019 8:25 am

OK. I will go read it on Amazon. I'm sorry you don't feel comfortable here anymore. Your contribution has been outstanding.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by nyjints2004 » Thu Jun 06, 2019 7:03 pm

I don’t blame you for sending it over to amazon. I’ll be reading it there.

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by SamWarrens » Fri Jun 07, 2019 9:47 am

Yoi'll have to be more explicit
What is the full name of this Amazon site so I can find it.
Searching just Amazon brings up furniture ads.
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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by knight4princess » Fri Jun 07, 2019 10:14 am

Just go the front of the Amazon site and enter the author's name in the main search box. I paid my three bucks and am reading it now. Considerable amount of additional material. No review yet. LOL

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by Joatster » Fri Jun 07, 2019 10:52 am

amazon.com /author/joatster

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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by SamWarrens » Fri Jun 07, 2019 11:28 am

Your story is only available on kindle.
It would be nice if you finished it here where everyone could read it rather than leaving it truncaded like this.
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Re: Ponytail: A Bull's Story

Unread post by knight4princess » Fri Jun 07, 2019 5:02 pm

OK. My review:

If you are a fan of Ponytail: A Bull's Story you will be OK with spending three bucks to read a fairly well-done conclusion to the tale that Jay Oatster began to spin at the beginning of this thread. Some of the dynamics change. Others don't. There is a little bit of a surprise ending and he does justice to the story he wrote in so many installments here.

I think I was most impressed that he found a way to present the work as an e-book and hopefully make a few dollars in the process. I have an e-book I hope to publish also so this is sort of an inspiration.

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